I can
do you believe?
please, never say never
challenges I never let pass
I can't.
A contest entry
- Cinquain by Yemassee.
554 points, ended June 21, 2008, 23 entries
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You and me both! Love a good challenge, keeps the energy fresh and the blood flowing! Great words in few!
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Thanks so much for this response to my 'challenge' poem hahaha the blood flows a lot hahaha on some challenges lol
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This is a very splendid cinquain. I enjoyed the message behind it (which came from shockingly so few words), and nothing felt forced at all. well done!
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Thanks, this is a great review for moi lol
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full of wisdoms...we all should posses this attitude toward life and love...everyday is a new journey...and if we take that new step with enthusiasm we can be so much better a person..great cinquain
Mal
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For sure and I most agree lol and thanks
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Great attitude.
Great message.
Great cinquain.
Aesthete
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I think many of us can not resist a good challenge and your poem speak volumes!!! Wonderfully written!!
I wish you all the best in the contest!
Linda
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Yes to challenges hahaha hopefully one will survive them hahaha
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I believe you! Ah I have learned something about you just now. You like challenges. I like snacks but that is another story.
I'm sure my imaginary friend Beaumont is learning that indeed people here on AP can write cinquains.
Thansk for entering, your cinquain was fun, and makes the contest more enjoyable.
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me too :)
love them challenges! Good luck as I am reading them all! joy
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Thank you so much, lol, those challenges hahahaha gets me everytime hahahaha lol
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a good piece, the form is good, it is waving a smile. aye, if there is a challenge laid down then it has to be picked up.
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Ian, you are genius hahaha the way you say things brings out the point so fabulously lol
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