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Love Should Be

Love
Our special bond that
Ventures deep into our hearts, for all
Eternity shall it stay
Seductive,
Hilariously, fatally,
Outrageous,
Unleashed,
Loving each other is truly
Desirable,
Bewildering and most of all
Exciting

Baby this is how you should feel when you are with me
cause i know i feel it when I'm with you
its definitely how love should be
and baby we have it!! we own this love!!

Author notes

I wrote this for my best friend "hateme" aka Shehan
Its not my usual style but i thought i would give it a go.

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  • Upoiuoisjcokmi
    June 23, 2008
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    Good write...You must really like your friend, lol.
    -Raphaël-