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Our primal desires.

I longed for you through
the loneliest nights
pleading the cold, empty space
beside me
to contain, your presence
once more.

Another empty bottle
and another empty night,
drowning the
dark
dreary pangs of regret,
missing your intoxicating
passion and lust.


Fantasy becomes reality
when you find your way back into
my arms;
I feel my fire deep
within ignited
that very first touch and my love
spills forth.

Your penetrating warmth
arouses my primal desires,
promising the release
I desperately need.
Your ivory form,
melting upon my flesh.


I’m lost to your heart
when hands
caress every, sizzling naked
inch of my desirousness
and we begin to share
our story of romance.

Submitting to your rapture,
my cravings
savour
your pulsing, quivering delicacy.
We fervently capture the night,
tasting the ripened fruit
of a love that can never be quelled.


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The italic parts are written by Mark and non italic'd by Me

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    Breath-taking!!!

    The sensual fires burn bright!!! Thank you and best of luck!!!

    ~Azlyn~


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    What a great sensual collab!! Tasteful while still being so arousing!! This is beautifully done you two... absolutely love it!!


  • Weltt
    June 19, 2008
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    Like the title!


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      June 19, 2008
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      ah thats good, wasnt sure about it but it keeps growing on me, nd feels right Thanks Dan

  • Weltt
    June 18, 2008

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    A sensual ride in gentle eroticism. this was a wonderfully crafted collaboration. Each of your thoughts blended so well together and were seamless. This is sophisticated in its images but still arouse passion deep within. Well done and best of luck to you both!!


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      June 18, 2008
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      Thank you..I was very happy to allow Mark to do his very first collaboration


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    Holy heck sis!! Let me know when this is up!!!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 16, 2008
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    scaryyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha
    love you sissy ^_^


  • Weltt
    June 16, 2008
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    Oh wow! This is going to be good! Can't wait

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