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Laugh A Little

Laughter is the best medicine
personally prescribed prescription
Promoting practical peace particles
merry emotional memories that linger

Laughter; that gem in the making
that leaves a most pleasant trail
all the way back to the inspirator
all the way forward to the future's page.

Rising to the occasion of harmony
draped in the colors of royal purple
lapping up frowns in wild abandon
leaving in its wake pure pearls of joy.

Author notes

just put thoughts on paper

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  • individuality gold member
    June 18, 2008
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    the gold


  • individuality gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, great alliteration used here and yes i will agree that laughter is the best medicine and unlike most medicines it does not leave a bitter taste in the mouth.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      June 16, 2008
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      Amen, it may require miniature stitches, however, hahaha that's about it hahaha lol


  • Shades of Pale silver member
    June 16, 2008
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    it was good

    it was good needs a little more despipition