the heart breaking truth
was that i loved you until the end of time
until you broke my heart
the tears i cried that night were meant for you
so that you would come back
but i guess i was wrong
you left me in spite
of happiness
to sadness!
but i still can love
even though i've been broken to pieces
which are now fill with hate!
as from now i have decided to move on
to better myself to the world thinking
that i can do things without
thinking of the past...
Author notes
"though my heart may be broken, i can still love with all the little pieces" Jessica Noelle
A contest entry
- prompt contest by Brokentruth93.
300 points, ended July 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me any kind of love you want by ApocalypseAngel.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think thanks =]
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you can do things without thinking of the past, trust me i've been there, but the past is the reason you are the person you are today, the love past, the broken hearts and the lessons you have learned are wonderful things to bring forward with you, keep moving forward, keep growing into a better person
keep up the wonderful writing
ɛiɜ ~Amy -
this is a lovely piece, lots of emotion and feeling in the words.
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Wonderful!
the ability of human beings to
recover from lost or disappointments
makes us superior to all living creatures.
The spirit of resilience keeps us alive.
Whatever doesn't kill us makes us stronger.
This piece is a beautiful triumph of
the human spirit
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"i loved you until the end of time
until you broke my heart".
That was such a powerful statement!
I felt your pain. That is what poetry is all about!
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wow!! great!!!
loved it sis!!!
really goood
hope u win the contest!!!
love
me
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This is an awesome poem! It's very sad and well it's a great poemI really like the line
the tears i cried that night were meant for you
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"you left me in spite of happiness to sadness" doesn't really flow that well, but it was still a great read! i think i fits the prompt well, thank you for joining my first contest!!
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Wow I that was really good! You expressed yourself so well and put your feelings right into it. Great job
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