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Make the Moon Exclusively Yours


Do not just
Aim for the moon
Instead
Achieve it.
Make every success of yours
Not the moon
But
A step towards it.
Stars are many
One for every
Tom , Dick  and  Harry.
Moon is one
Make it yours.
With every success
The ladder grows
Your moon appears
Bigger, brighter.
The distance
Do measure it
Ofcourse
With your success.
And then
The moon is yours
Exclusively yours.
Grab it
With a smile on your face
With a joyous heart
With a crown of stars
Do feel the happiness
It counts.

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  • Blooming Poet
    June 25, 2008

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    This is a very inspirational poem full of hopeful words that everyone loves or needs to hear every once in a while


  • BellaD
    June 24, 2008

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    A beautiful message in this poem. I like the twist at the beginning,
    Do not just
    Aim for the moon
    Instead
    Achieve it.
    Nicely done. Keep writing.


  • sherrilyn1999
    June 19, 2008

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    I love the idea of aiming for the brightest "goal" in the night sky... I wondered if this message was for someone in particular?

    • Aliya Abbas
      June 24, 2008
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      thanx for the comment and applause as well.


    • Aliya Abbas
      June 19, 2008

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      thanx
      this poem i gifted to my husband when he was struggling to build up his career. Alhumdulillah now he is successfully placed in US working on cancer cells.


  • crimsondew
    June 16, 2008
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    What a lovely message this carries...

    All the best on the contest!

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