In the sheltered heart of silence
where his foliage clings lightly to the wind
I follow him on feathered soles
talking of winter's past
and watching
how he gently lifts the corners of my life
touching earth
with the sound of a few leaves
beneath white...
Author notes
http://www.wonderfulinfo.com/amazing/wpeacock.htm
A contest entry
- white peacock picture prompt #11 quickie by marlene47.
600 points, ended June 21, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Such a light telling, I'm watching my breath so feathers aren't disturbed.
I like your place in the heart of silence, lightly following, the winter memories, his gentle lift of your life's corners and the sounds he brings.
Thank you for your gentle rustling entry.
Marlene
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