Love lies in pieces
upon my broken back,
trembling in the night
with all the love I lack
Morning arrives
too fast for me,
I’m rubbing my eyes
that don’t want to see
The space that you once held
reflects upon my mind,
the memories address me
some of them are kind
Loss of my soul
carries me so far away,
as I try to make my way
in the birth of a new day
A contest entry
- prompt contest by Brokentruth93.
300 points, ended July 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a sad and lonely feeling flowing across your page...seems to pull a saddened sigh from somewhere deep within...for love has walked away...winner for sure!
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this is a really good poem, an amazing poem, but i dont see how it works with the prompt. but thank you for joining my contest!
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