Laced atop sweet emerald trees.
Diamonds of hearts glow for thee
Forever our love shall stay
Through and through we will lay
Together as one we dream.
Unyielding passion now gleams.
Pulsation runs unrelenting.
Adorned by stars glinting.
She sings with elated wonder
Turning my mind a blunder
O’ this passion entices me
Surging forth for all to see
Unabashed now we do dance
Our bodies sealed in stance
Author notes
AABB rhyme scheme poem
A contest entry
- Fall Me In Love. by Pretty Britty.
1400 points, ended June 29, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is a very pretty write from you. i wish you well in this contest that you have entered. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Excellent I love the ole flair. 'Tis a fine scroll thou hast penned. Proving thy title true..King William.
Keep penning, I shall keep reading thee.....
Novy
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This poem is good I love the whole thing! A++++++ enfinety
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This is a nice write,
very sweet yet I think it's a little lacking in emotion but,
hey I suppose that's just how some people write. -
a good piece of poetry that flows gracefully with a light rhyme and rhythm and captures the essence of love with style.
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