Clashes of frights fall on me
Suddenly I’m blinded
Falling on the gravel
Handing you the control switch to me
What I’ve done makes everything new
Feeling numb to the worlds caring ways
Hoping somebody would understand this pain,
But knowing I can’t tell, I will feel the same
Unable to speak about what I feel
In my mind it’s so unreal
Doubting I can make it through.
But still wondering what I really can do?
A contest entry
- How bad do you feel for your thoughts? by Blossom.
330 points, ended July 18, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good poem. Letting someone else be in control of you will never make you happy. Your words make me feel your sadness.
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hmm.. you changed it.
i like the changes.
it is still pretty.
i like it.
well done.
love always,
heather nell
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This is really good..I understand it
and I know what this feels like..I've
been where you are..I was there for a
long time but finally I found something
inside myself and pulled myself out of it
and I also had the help of three special ppl
[[nate, you, and heather]] and Im in the best
place I can be in..hunnie..you've always got
me and I will always be here to listen..even
when you feel like you can't talk you can..
if you feel you should..just know that you've
got me and others that really care about you
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yay.. me and sarah and nate. thanks buddie.
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