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A Cute Love Poem

This is us now,
sitting under the apple tree,
eating our jelly sandwiches
and laughing at nothing together.

This is the beginning of you and me,
walking hand-in-hand on the tree-lined path,
the sun's rays shining down on us
and talking about nothing together.

This is what I wish to have,
this picture of love and joy,
encompassing us forever and ever
and neverending, lasting into the eternal.

This is Strawberry Shortcake with
Blueberry Muffin strolling hand-in-hand
like the both of us- just that their love is pure.
Can this be real, can this be pure too?

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  • ml12
    November 15, 2008

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    Wow! This was amazing! I know little of Strawberry Shortcake but thanks for bringing her to the table. The whole thing was wonderful!


  • Lexie
    June 22, 2008

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    aww..... how adorable. i loved it. much love in this and the funny part is, it is the beginning of the relationship. how sweet. i wished love would find me agian and leave the drama behind. another great poem.