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love is beautiful

Love entwined with care and affection
Understanding mingled with a lot of patience
But your eyes hold my entire world in them
That’s why you are beautiful to me

Your charms everlasting
Enriched with humbleness
But your eyes hold my entire world in them
And that’s why you are beautiful to me

Now we are 60, have traveled years together
You have been a wonderful wife and excellent mother
And your eyes hold my entire world in them
That’s why you are beautiful to me

My hand in yours,
Your eyes are the mirror to your heart
And together these years, have never let us apart
My eyes feel that you are the most beautiful women to me.

Author notes

'tweakermuffin'

i guess my inspiration is clear from the poem itself. enjoy


prompt- you dont love a women because she is beautiful, but she is beautiful because you love her-anon
http://photobucket.com/image/beautiful/aquabeach/Muah.jpg?o=86

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  • new born
    October 5, 2008
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    I like your metaphor 'your eyes are the mirror to your heart.' Very good and best of luck!


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Aww such a sweet dedication from a prompt. I believe we all want to be able to write a poem about our loved one just like this in 60 years time. Best to you

  • piccola silver member
    August 4, 2008

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    Nice take on the quote/prompt. I think we are at first attracted to a person physically and then emotionally as the love grows deeper. Maybe going from infatuation to love itself. Nice job, thank you for the entry.


  • InMyFlames
    June 30, 2008

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    great work! i love the line that you always repeated at the end of the staza, thanks for entering! my favourite lines are:

    "Now we are 60, have traveled years together
    You have been a wonderful wife and excellent mother
    And your eyes hold my entire world in them
    That’s why you are beautiful to me"


  • poetic-enigma21
    June 16, 2008
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    thank you for the bronze
    am glad you liked it.

  • Nighttime angel
    June 16, 2008

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    this is beautiful, brought tears to my eyes. I love your take on the prompt. its beyond words. its so beautiful, so full of love. you did an excellent job with the prompt.

    thank you for giving me the honor of reading your poem.

    good luck


    kat

  • Nighttime angel
    June 16, 2008
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    http://photobucket.com/image/beautiful/aquabeach/Muah.jpg?o=86

    here is your link, if you don't like it just let me know. you have one more chance.

    kat

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