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Trees

The autumn trees,
With their emo leaves,
Falling like colored tears of the sky.

A contest entry

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  • reckless abandon
    September 6, 2008

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    I do love this a lot. And I'm a big fan of short poems. But I can't help but think this would make an amazing poem with more length. I loved the simile of the last line. Thanks for entering and good luck.