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Wandering Through Wildflowers~

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As I lie with you
in the Springtime

in a field where tranquility blooms,

let my scent entice your lips
to softly wander
through my wildflowers

as petals fall from my hair.

Tumble with me
in these blades of green
Let the dewdrops wet our kiss
as the rays of sunshine smile
upon the beauty of such love.

Hold my hand

let me place it to my heart
Leave me thirsting for your laughter
every moment we must part.

Could you strum it for me,
sweetly
Can you try
to make me hum
while lashes flutter
so innocently
Does my intimacy show?

Sprinkle seeds
of love upon me
whisper words
to take my breath

let my fingers trace your smile;
leaving tender places

laced with my affections.




♥♥






~


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inspired by the song
"Houses Of The Holy" by the GREAT Led Zeppelin

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  • JinSays gold member
    May 23

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    ohwooooow. . .first, I absolutely adore this song.
    Cant say it any better than that. Second, I love what it inspires in you.
    Very very lovely, soft and full of color.
    It is lined in gold, and Im so glad.
    Gorgeous, this is going on my list too.
    Love it, almost as beautiful as you.
    .
    Jin


  • penman gold member
    May 23
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    excellent

    such a great write. So very well expressed. Congrats on the gold.


  • Daizee silver member
    May 10
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    This is so fresh and alive I feel I can almost smell the flowers....

    Stacy


  • dat2cool
    February 19
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    dat2cool

    What a sweet poem. I'll lie with you and do that stuff lol


  • ea silver member
    September 22, 2008
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    such a soft romantic invite no wonder it is limned with gold~


  • transcendental baby gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Oh that's lovely! You set such a tranquil but passionate mood in this! It makes me dream of lying int the wildflowers with my true love and just breathing in the beauty of words felt!

  • Robertearlberger
    July 26, 2008
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    Well Done

    Very lovely and intoxicating


  • michael thomas gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    your words overall have a serendipitous bucolic warm affected glow to them. reading this poem is easy because none of the images or ideas are constrained. your words are like a well placed table were the guest feels calm.


  • Mallig gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful, lush write, I really enjoyed the romantic journey in these words. Congratulations on the gold!


    • poet2angels gold member
      July 5, 2008
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      ty, Mally!
      It was fun to write and I was very excited about that contest
      TY so much. It is always a pleasure when you visit!


      Lynda


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 29, 2008

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    This is such a very smooth write... Very well penned to express those tender desires of the heart. Some great imagery to detail - flowing soft. Great piece inspired by such an amazing song!!!


  • Errant Panther gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    absolutley breath taking imagery, soft and touching and definitely a piece that uplifts the spirit and leaves a long lingering sigh upon the heart, no wonder this is crowned in gold.


  • Randomly Beautiful
    June 29, 2008

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    This is beautiful. Well deserving of gold.


  • toomysterious
    June 29, 2008
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    Beautiful melodic words here, well worthy of the Gold. Congratulations.


  • MuddyKing
    June 29, 2008

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    if this is you being strange...then I envy you
    congrats kind lady


  • MuddyKing
    June 29, 2008
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    and Zep inspired this..that is what is uncanny for me...although When the Levee Breaks ...takes my breath every time I hear it
    love it


    • poet2angels gold member
      June 29, 2008
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      Well, Led Zep is my very fave and I find Robert Plant's voice captivating..I always have His voice does inspire romance so maybe its just me being strange


  • kaibab silver member
    June 18, 2008

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    So wonderful and romantic angel-poet...Muddy will love this one for certain...so much Nature to move the soul...


  • troyias
    June 16, 2008

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    Such a poet

    your flow is beautiful, the rythem rich and full. the sensous redetion of wonderful love. You has as always penned such a wonderful vision. Great Job Sweet one. Good Luck in the contest.

    *Go with God* my Lovely Child,

    Your AP Mom (Valerie)


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    Lovely Sis,

    You share your songs that bring inspiration, and sweet peace.
    I enjoy your use of words, and how carefully placed each one is.
    You can sing, hum, a hymn any time for me.
    Creative, and inscribed with glory and grace.

    Love, brother Timothy


  • jasminerose
    June 15, 2008

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    A beautiful sensual piece of poetry! Lovely in its metaphor, graceful in its presentation and alluring in its whispers...
    Hmmm... so I wonder what music you were listening to
    Passion spills from your pen once again my dearest friend!
    Gorgeous!
    All my best to you in the contest!
    Jazzy

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