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Through my eyes you will see
all my pain and suffering
through my lips you will taste
all the tears that run down my face
with my heart you can feel
all my love i have to heal.

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i wrote this when i was so heart broken

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  • LionessK silver member
    June 16, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    This is good. I think some of the best (most beautiful) poetry can be written while we go through pain... the times that are not so beautiful. That's what I love about poetry. You have few lines here but they say so much, everything needed to get your point across.
    Thank you for sharing your words and talent here with us all, I hope you will continue to do so.


    ~Kristy


  • LadyLuff
    June 16, 2008
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    wonderful poem!
    i enjoyed the flow of it was great!
    good work!!