Baby, you broke my heart.
You stomped it into the dirt.
You've shattered it to pieces.
You've ripped it out of my shirt.
My life's turned inside out, girl.
It will never be the same.
But I'll never leave your world,
I will try to win your game.
Those tiny bits that are my heart
Are beating even still.
They have loved you, right from the start
And, forever, will.
You've cast aside my loving heart.
Tossed out through your backdoor.
But everyday that we're apart
Those pieces love you more.
Author notes
sorta corny....partly truth/partly fiction
A contest entry
- prompt contest by Brokentruth93.
300 points, ended July 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a great write. I really enjoyed reading this and the imagery was wonderful. I loved the last two lines. It was such a great ending, sad, but great. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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aww that was sweet . nothing is corny if you really mean it though right ? best of luck in the contest
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aww! this is such a lovely piece! >.< i like it very much!
it was depressing, but the ending was very strong and pretty true too! keep penning!
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wow, i really enjoyed reading this one, but the first stanza was kinda funky to read, the flow was a little off, but other then that, that was a great write! thanks for joining my contest!
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