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Tick-Tock

The minute hand moves on the clock,
And I hear a quiet:

T
  I
   C
     K
       -
     T
   O
 C
K

I needed more time,
but time wasn't on my side.
Seconds were left and I inhaled
what was possibly my last breath,

and I failed. 

 

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