Jesus Is My God,
Every single day,
He was crucified,
His life, he payed.
He never hurt no one,
He'll come back someday,
Jesus Is My God,
God Bless The U.S.A.
A contest entry
- KIDS VS. ADULTS by longlife by longlife.
425 points, ended June 26, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Good! And Very straightforward, which I like. I cnt wait for that day to come!
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Great write!
REALLY JESUS WILL COME BACK
I loved this one, the meaning, the depth and the emotions they all mix very well together.
You're good at short writes so keep it up.
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Glenn
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Short and to the point. stay lifted up.
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This is a nice poem that tells a little about your religion. It is short but it carries a powerful message. Good job!
Jesus is my God,
God bless the U.S.A. -
SUch a lovely poem! I like it very much, I'm glad you trust in the Lord like that!
GOD BLESS YOU!
Annie
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great
Good poem! I think you'll be a great writer some day! I love rhyming -
nicely done, Slick
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alittle convuesing but i like it cheak grahmer but same goes for me! -
Not bad slick. Thanks for sharing; good luck in the contest.
Brian -
thank you for writing that cause it is true and to the point , Jesus is awesome and he loves us all . for with out his love we would all fall . thanks again .
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