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hopeless love

What am i to say?
Is it love,your just pushing me away.
Through the pain and the tears i remain strong,
but not strong enough you left me.
My hearts ripped in peices i know this is wrong.
Im lost in a world of darkness and doom.
Hoping one day you'll rescue me soon...

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  • Ms.spooki
    July 30, 2008
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    its deep and sincere.....i love it!!!

  • Sun-shiney
    July 2, 2008

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    come save me my love with ur flawless love. come hold me tight and don't let me fall from the sky. come save me love come hold my hand as i cry come kiss me love and make the pain go bye.