I sit here in my room
And think of you
The person I can't have
It tears me apart
But then I know
That one day I
Will open my eyes and see
That even though
My heart may be broken
I can still love with all the little pieces
Author notes
"though my heart may be broken, i can still love with all the little pieces" Jessica Noelle
Inspired by this quote and giving cerdit to the author of it . nice quote i might add.
sorry so short it's been a minute and i'm trying to get back into the flow of things .
Best of luck to all that enter !!!!
A contest entry
- prompt contest by Brokentruth93.
300 points, ended July 2, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It may be short, but I actually think it's the perfect length...
You said just what needed to be said, nothing more, nothing less. Very nice write.
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wow... that is really good! may i copy that and put it on my wall of poems? i'll put your name at the bottom!! lol... good luck!! i love the flow and how you added the quote to the poem! that is really good! *smile* good luck!
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why sure you can hanging it on your wall lol . I'm glad you enjoyed it thanks !!!
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