Black like the widowed spider,
my name was written right there.
Inside the page of this ornate book,
found in a world of dreams.
Ornate people stood lookin on,
telling secrets about me.
"What is the meaning of this?"
All the people just watched and laughed.
Lonely I sat wondering,
seeking answers from these people.
Author notes
I like it wut do u think?
*BMIFOTWALS*<---my letters
A contest entry
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a nice snapshot of society..i feel like this is torn out of a book..def. a hint of perception..quite unique..intersting piece..short but makes u think..nice job and good luck in the contest
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i entered this contest too! it was more difficult than i thought it would be. good luck in both of these contests!
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i really love the detials you have used in this wonderful poem, nice job with a set of letters, this poem flows great, good luck in the contest and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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I am having trouble with my computer. I will Judge tomorrow. Sorry.
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Whoa. I like it too. This was an amzingly orchistrated piece. You really wrote an amazing piece, even when limited. THank you.
Carrie
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thanx i had fun writing it i liked this contest alot it was cool
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