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Kemsdcbrtl

Killers lurk behind closed doors
Enemies crying on floors 
Many don’t care of what they see
Something has gone terribly wrong
Don’t tell what you’ve seen to anybody
Changing our clothes so the blood don’t show
Brutally causing pain,
Refrain.
Tomorrow brings another day
Lock the doors, and hide away

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KEMSDCBRTL
write a line for each letter in that order

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  • crimsondew
    June 15, 2008

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    A sad write full of feelings....great attempt with your medley of letters..
    All the best dear


  • McRae by nature
    June 15, 2008
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    I am having trouble with my computer. I will Judge tomorrow. Sorry.


  • l33t-n1nj4
    June 15, 2008

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    wow that was awsome for the letters u got it blew me away GREAT JOB!!!


  • gmmike
    June 15, 2008
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    Wow. Really nice job in pulling that off. Good luck.


  • McRae by nature
    June 15, 2008

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    Wow, impressive. Glad you pulled through such a challenge. Thank you.

    Much Love
    Carrie


  • Livingemptyspaces
    June 15, 2008

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    You really did have a hard group of letters. Dark, but good still. Great luck in the contest.

    -Living empty spaces

  • McRae by nature
    June 15, 2008
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    K E M S D C B R T L

    Make me proud

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