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Swirling ardor

Rippling through my body.
Engulfed by intoxicating love.
Sensations scream unrelenting vigor.

Beckoning she lures, enchanting
Frizzled scenes offering hue delight.
Lurid images coarse, vividly enticing.

Her lithe body enrobed, luminous. 
Transfixing my very essence
Jolting, pulsation sailing.

My being shuddering, drinking pure ecstasy. 
Her physique washed aglow.
Showering moon illuminates her. 

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  • Angelflower
    July 1, 2008

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    ooh.. this was really nice and soft.. I really liked the flow and imagery here.. You did a wonderful job.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck.


    Angel