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nonpoem: a step like dying



some time ago
my finger bones grew too long to mock ellipses
but stopped short of mysterious

so I’m trapped
and my heart has hushed between my lungs
so I can concentrate a little more
on breathing

to say my blood is no longer steeped in ink
is wrong
because what truly blanks these pages
is not the absence of poetry
but the absence of folds
for hasty airplanes

I understand
that I don’t understand why

some time ago,
I stopped spinning
and the world stopped being
so beautiful

Author notes

I wonder if I really haven't grown. I wonder if I've really forgotten.

First (un)poem-ish drivel since last August. Sadly, I can barely vent that frustration.

I want to start moving again, but I hesitate to try. I'm so afraid that I can't anymore.

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  • aeolia
    June 15, 2008

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    I can relate to the poem, the author's notes... everything. It's actually rather freaky.

    Do keep writing.

    • if sighing
      June 19, 2008
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      Thanks, I'm trying on that writing part, but I'm in a slump.

      Ah, oh well. I'll have to catch up on reading your poetry. I hope I remember how to comment. eek!