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Betrayed

I trusted you completely
I gave you my heart, and you just leave me
How can you be so cold?
How can you leave me on this unfamiliar road?

My heart is sore for cupid’s arrow met its target
Carefree and happy, is all I ever wanted to be
But in love with you I fell,
And down, down, down into this living hell

You said you loved me with all your heart
You painted a picture of star-crossed lovers
Your lies I believed, you fooled me
And now I sit here and cry as my very heart falls apart.

Alone in this eternal cold
Curse you and your beautiful face
Love turned to hate,
I am damned to endure this lonely fate

Spring never comes
Only winter's bitter cold
And summer’s everlasting heat
In this god forsaken place
I surrender in defeat

Never am I a thought in your mind
Never did I hold a place in your heart
Never did you love me, not even at the start
Sorrow claims my soul,
And away you go, 

Never looking back

Leaving without even a scratch 

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    June 15, 2008

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    Your imagery is fantastic, and your heart break and anger come across loud and clear. I asked for emotion and you gave it. Thank you for your entry, good job.