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I see a cascading waterfall
I see the cloudless sky
I see a blue jays wingspan
gleaming in the sun
I see the ocean
I see the Hope Diamond
I see sparkling sapphire


I see an eternally engraved smile
I see life, happiness, hope
I see a promise
I see joy
I see everything I need to
Within your eyes.

Author notes

I know I need to fix the ending...but yeah. Any other cunstructive criticsm is welcome and/or appreciated

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  • BabyBun silver member
    June 19, 2008
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    Great entry good luck