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Pretty Bubbles

fragmentary
temporary
multi-colored jewels
Priceless just the same
rainbows caught
inside crystal balls
floating on the wind
Chasing them
an endless children's game.

A contest entry

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  • Rovingone gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    Such a sweet innocent poem. You made a picture that was so easy to see. Everyone should have a bubble wand and bubble solution on summer evenings, to make their own rainbows!


  • Folklor
    June 16, 2008

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    wow sweet and simple beautiful imagery. one of the best poems entered i loved the way you call bubbles a game in which children chase them such a fantastic image i will always relate to bubbles now. well done keep writing.


    • toomysterious
      June 16, 2008
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment. It makes the whole process worthwhile. Besides you do nice contests.


  • basilisk
    June 15, 2008
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    I forgot the:


  • basilisk
    June 15, 2008

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    Lovely poem. I really like:

    "rainbows caught
    inside crystal balls"

    Good luck in the contest!

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