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star crossed lovers

i cared of nothing else at that moment,
except for the look within his eyes
at the very moment they met mine.

i cared of nothing more at this place,
then of his hand upon my chest,
and against my neck his sweet caress.

to see him first across the room,
i knew then of a love so strong-
the thought nothing to go wrong.

when in hours i recognized the feeling,
as each point of anticipation
became my recreation.

and the gentle touch upon my face,
his lips connecting with my own,
now i am to be resown.

such vicious wrath of those about,
to glare and dispise without thought,
that 'twas he for which i sought.

but then such night fell,
when he shall leave me,
and worry for him is all i see.

and when dawn breaks the horizon,
faith shall come back to haunt,
for which a wording of different font.

my hand once more in his,
the gentle touch of such love,
given to me only from above.

so in besoughting of such a man,
little was noticed that around,
people took no faith or found.

they tore me away from him,
dear love my heart left behind with you,
a bloody puddle never so true.

and as i was bound away,
my soul cried for yours,
waiting for healing of these sores.

when alast word of him found way,
but news of such despair,
life to me was no longer fair.

i hate thiose who took him from my life,
and shall cry until revenge can be found,
my heart shall not make a sound.

5 years from now,
married to the dirtiest of men,
it's my greatest sin.

i walk the streets still in heartbreak.
but one glance behind i see,
that my love is looking back at me.

such eyes of mine,
why betray my mind with hope,
when already i cannot cope?

but he reaches out to touch my face,
and my tears begin to fall,
already he breaks the wall.

i reach out my own hand,
and finally believe that he is real,
for him i could feel.

'dear sweet love,' he whispers,
'i shall never leave you again,
this is where we begin.'

i shake my head with regret.
'fair love i thought you dead,
so i myself am now wed.'

his gaze does not faulter.
'my love fear not,
for 'tis not he whom you sought.

i have heard the stories for years,
when 2 years before at sixteen,
you married a man so mean.

and now you bare his bruises well,
and tell many such lies,
but i had heard your cries.'

i wrap my arms around him,
and pray to let it be that way,
to never lose this day.

for weeks i commit the sin,
but only for the love i had,
so never again to become sad.

i knew it would be a matter of time,
before my husband would see,
that in my eyes 'twas not he.

his hand came out of nowhere,
tight around my neck it hurt,
'tell me whore what are your last words?'

i smile at him,
and then they fall, my tears,
and i forget how he is my fear.

'5 years i thought him dead,
but still my heart was his,
understand sir this.

i love my love,
and loving only him-
betraying all of them.

he never lost hope,
and i never seen anyone
but him across the dawn.

he shall catch word,
and he shall revenge,
so watch the door's hinge.

for soon after breaking,
you too will be dead,
he who i wish i never wed.'

i let out my last breath,
and fall hard to the floor,
knowing there was no more.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    This was deeply beautiful, touching & heartfelt.
    Emotions poured from your words.. and this was such a meaningful & honest write.

    Thank you for entering & best of luck


  • xCandieKissesx
    August 14, 2008

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    As I caress your smooth lips
    The feeling of entirety surges through my soul
    Opening my eyes to one of Gods miracles


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 11, 2008

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    Ill be honest this is a great write but i had difficulty reading it against this background , even though the background is beautiful. Maybe change the font colour? A beautiful write though which i enjoyed reading good luck in the contest


  • Sound of Madness
    July 7, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you much luck, and I really like the back ground you used for this piece.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 22, 2008

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    Wow very interesting i like it alot its very very well written and worded so greatly. And plus you made the point that you were trying to make. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly

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