Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Shot

I'm shot
My heart hurts, heavy in my heart
I'm gone
No one has seen the scar, the single scar
I'm alone
In the world because I cant, cant tell
I'm hurt
Because I hurt myself
I'm torn
Torn between ideas, friends, family
Again
and again, on the same spot, so no one will know
I'm not
really that bad, I try to tell myself
And then
I overload and fall back to what i thought id never do
I'm shot
in the head, I cant even think really
I'm shot
in the soul, i've lost hope
I'm shot
in the heart, i've lost love

Author notes

A reminder that poetry is an outlet. I dont believe in half of what i said in this so dont freak out, if you know me in real life but dont comment. Dont worry <3

Does the water bits make sense?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Raptur3
    July 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I like this, it feels like the actual gun is the events that lead your emotions astray. the events tht pierce you, steal your soul and for a moment you forget who you are. very well written.