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[fireflies during the storms]

the rain soothes the earth,
thunder rolls, lightning sparks
as we find relief from
the daytime heat.
somehow you and the sky
let me in,
let me swim and wade around in
a beautiful nothingness.
[oh love, you and i both know
we aren't leaving.]
there's burning in the sky tonight,
amid the layers of draped clouds.
as these summer stars keep
the nightmares away
[oh cassiopeia]
open windows, steamed air
seeps through the screen.
lay back and release
into the softened grass,
it's all i know,
letting go.







[i wonder where the fireflies hide
during these June storms.]

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  • i love the last lines.
    summer storms are all we have here in iowa
    [at least this year]
    good luck in the contest.


  • Miss Faith
    June 16

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    oh my goodness. this was simply gorgeous. I loved the entire thing!!! thank you very much for entering

    "somehow you and the sky
    let me in,
    let me swim and wade around in
    a beautiful nothingness.
    [oh love, you and i both know
    we aren't leaving.]
    there's burning in the sky tonight,
    amid the layers of draped clouds.
    as these summer stars keep
    the nightmares away

    [i wonder where the fireflies hide
    during these June storms.] "