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You can run.
It’s ok.
Really.
Run rings around your fingers.
Run for president.
Run to New York.
Run to exorcise.
The odds are, eventually
you’ll run into my arms…
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In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Free Verse Word Prompt by Dalaney.
850 points, ended July 4, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Patience and faith. Nice work my friend. Love the use of
exorcise - in place of exercise. Brings this work to a higher level. Well done. ~Pamela
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Thank you Pam. Yes patience and faith, what one might call endurance often wins in the end.
Thank you for your comment.
Paul
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Sweet!
This was a beautiful, succinct poem. Love the ending.
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Thank you Bella for commenting.
Paul
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Great fun!!
Best of luck in this contest!!!!
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Thanks!
Paul
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great!
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Great!
Paul
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lol. I loved this!
The repetition of run, really works.
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Do you ever "run to exorcise" (with an 'o' and not an 'e') too?
Thanks for the comment Kathleen.
Paul
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This was great! I loved the last line!
Very cool!
~Lisa~
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Thank you Lisa and a very warm welcome to AP
Paul
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Very, very clever!! I like your simplicity and form.
Just taken by this gem!!
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Thank you Wolfheart. I'm glad you so enjoyed this one.
Paul
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