Shimmering in the bright light
Bubbles reflect the wonderful day
comfort in the bath at night
glistening for the world to see
a bubble conceals a mystery
Why are they always round,
no matter the shape you use?
bubbles reflect colors of beautiful hues
some are big and some are small
some are so tiny, not seen at all
when take a bubble wand and blow
where they will float you don’t know
bubbles are carried softly in the gentle gusts
be extra careful your bubbles may bust
popping here and landing there
bubbles are beautiful anywhere
Author notes
prompt bubbles
A contest entry
- Quickie: Bubbles by Folklor.
600 points, ended June 16, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1666 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice imagery. I like the way you describe the bubbles in details like that. Great job on the gold.
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Wonderful description of all the aspects of Bubbles, and why we find them so soothing. Well deserving of the Gold.
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This is just a joy to read fantastic flawless spotless! Finalist list! all the way great rhyme great description not forced and emotional well done i love your start
'Shimmering in the bright light
Bubbles reflect the wonderful day
comfort in the bath at night
glistening for the world to see
a bubble conceals a mystery'
how you portray them in the dark and the light and the ending was awsome saying how good they look anywhere
'bubbles are carried softly in the gentle gusts
be extra careful your bubbles may bust
popping here and landing there
bubbles are beautiful anywhere'
an outstanding poem.
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bubbles!!
great poem about bubbles!
lovely poem!
goodluck in the contest
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