Master, I am Yours totally.
Heart, body, and soul, and
I am only here for Your
pleasure without a say.
Bound in Your chains I
find that I am free.
Author notes
A true writing.
A contest entry
- 10/30/1 Quickie by SuicidalLover.
700 points, ended June 16, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is your first empression?
Comments
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i really like your take on this prompt and how you are "free" i like the wonderful thoughts you have used in this poem and it flows nicley and speaks loudly too, congratulations on your HM, and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Thank you Amy for your gracious comments and the encouragment to keep writing.
Thank You again
Hugs,
Cheryl
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Aw...for some reason this seems so sad to me....
I wish you better.
A heartfelt write and I thank you for entering.
~Kystal angel
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Thank you for your comments. It is anything but sad, for when i am with Master i have no worries. With Him i am free, free to be me...the submissive that i am.
Thank you very much for my green shiny
hugs,
Cheryl
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How true the last 2 lines ring...very beautiful...
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Thank you for your nice comments. *smiles*
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Oh sis this is butiful
Bound in Your chains I
find that I am free
good luck in the contest
xxx cheeky xxx
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Thank you sis for your sweet comments.
Yes i find that when i am with Master
i am free.
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