Lounge upon comfort's pillow,
I'll worship you...
patiently-
Tenderly invoke love's power
nudged by sultry stimulation.
I have much to discover of you,
even more to give...
pleasuring,
takes time~
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Author notes
Prompt: Patience/Non-virtuous ~ 30 Words exactly...
A contest entry
- PIF - Free Verse Word Prompt by Dalaney.
850 points, ended July 4, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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last three words...killer!
love this. Lane
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Beautifully penned. Pleasure is like taking a vacation on the sea.. slowly flowing ecstasy as vessel ride the lulling tide, bathe in warm waves under a hot sun. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Yes it does!!!! And I have all the time in the world for this!!! W00t!!! So HOT and STEAMY!!!! Gives the reader deliciously sensual thoughts.....Well done and best wishes......
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'pleasuring,
takes time~'
TRUETRUETRUETRUE!!!
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patiently pleasuring.
NICE!
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Oh, very, very nice! Loved "I'll worship you...
patiently-"
This is fabulous, and so true! Good luck in the contest, excellent!
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"I have much to discover of you,
even more to give...
Pleasuring,
takes time~ "
Amen to that! Patience really IS a virtue. Best of luck in the contest!
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JustBreathe
Hopefully a little patience will plow right through those "virtues" Thank-you!!! Hey! Long time "No See You...?" 
cia
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