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The skin I Am in

touch my surface
you connect with my soul
I respond with feeling
because I Am

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  • individuality gold member
    August 13, 2008
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  • okjcop
    August 8, 2008

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    Because I am
    your feeling reflects
    My soul responds
    One Love abides.

    You haven't lost
    your touch.


  • peridotPixi
    June 17, 2008

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    i really love the take on this prompt how it is so deep and has wonderful feelings expressed in a few short lines,thank you for the entry to my contest, good luck and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    this is kind of profound ... it hides something really important with its charming smallness and sturdy, sweet shape ... some say the soul is the top of the mountain, others say the body nourishes the soul ... you have ended this discussion: in a beautiful sort of way ...