You said you're sorry
But that is like blowing on water, maybe
the water ripples
but remains
You said you're sorry
But you killed the flower, and
its never coming back, not even with
water
You said you're sorry
Can you see you broke my heart like
thin, thin ice? and now its water, just
water
You said you're sorry
But the scars that no one can
see will
remain
You said you're sorry
Saying it again dosent help, changing
things might, but you
remain
You said you're sorry
You cant understand what you've
done, my heart is broken, and so it will
remain
You said you're sorry
You said you're fucking sorry
but then you go and go again, you
remain
You said you're sorry
I tried to talk to you, to get through
your thick skull. but
it remains
You said you're sorry
You ask if i'm okay-im not but
i cant tell you why
ever
You said you're sorry
You say you try your best
what is best? flirting?
water?
You said you're sorry
15 times. good job for
not being sorry. the water, the tears
remain
You said you're sorry
I'm raging like the storm outside
Water, water, water
remain
You said you're sorry
Better still, leave me and my
tears
alone
Does the water bits make sense?
Comments
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not bad...
i think that it might be better if it was in a more compact format.. you know what i mean?
like with less choppy lines and such. yah.
but otherwise... its okay. i think it could be improved though

