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You, and How I Hate You

Your kisses leave scars on my paling lips
My deathly darling, and oh, how I hate you
I tremble beneath your every kiss
But not for the reasons you think that I do
To have something so horrid touch my skin
Repulsive, repugnant, reviled by me
Of all of the sin I have reveled in
You, you alone brought me to my knees
You kiss down my neck and my skin turns to ash
Your breath is like poison, killing me slow
Each kind move that you make just widens the gash
The gash in my skin, as pallid as snow
I can’t get away, don’t know what to do
With you loving me and me hating you

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Option 3: form poetry. I chose a sonnet

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  • bananasfoster42
    June 17, 2008
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    this is awesome!! i love sonnets and this one rocks! thanks for the entry!