When first we met it was utter bliss
magick sparks from our first kiss.
The soft and gentle way you touch
enmeshed and in love so much.
Our eyes full of heady desire
thrashing like animals that never tire.
I offer you passion, all is yours.
wide open windows bring revolving doors.
Softly slide your passion in
never regretting love's only sin.
Never ask who to blame
when he softly whispers, what's your name?
Not to be outdone so I just say
it doesn't matter anyway.
Author notes
ADULT....
For my sweetest sister of light...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR GUIDANCE AND YOUR BLESSINGS..to call you my sister is one of my greatest privileges..your shared knowledge and advice means more to me than I can express...you have given me the path of my great grandma..and I thank you immensely for it..wiccan is the way...peace and harmony..should have known all along..MAY GODDESS BRING BRIGHTEST BLESSINGS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY...thank you so much for "adopting" me..as Ania's aunt...that means so much to me..I LOVE YOU AZLYN..
blessed be,
namaste..
r
Option 1...I guess this is classified as lust..
A contest entry
- Adding to my family and meeting new poets!!! by SummerlandRayne.
479 points, ended June 22, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options !! [PW ALLOWED!] by innocence jaded.xx.
625 points, ended July 13, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty please...
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A rich piece, very hot and steamy
Great rhyme and flow...a superbly penned piece 
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This was such a beautiful and creative poem. The words just seemed to flow together great. Thanks for the comment on my poem too.
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Cat,
thank you so much for your kind comment..
blessings..
namaste..
r
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Yesss wow I love this ! So full of lust and infatuation and just everything ! Incredible write. I loved how the rhyming wasn't forced at all, too. Thank you so much for the entry & best of luck to you !! ♥
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awww...love this...made me cry...hold on to the love with your sissy always...God took mine a little to soon, sure could use her today...love you sissy~best to you in the contest~Trisha
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I am just in love with
your talent!
What a clever and creative
mind you have.
This is just gorgeous!
Thanks so much for sharing!
~Pastel
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thank you so much Pastel...likewise...my dear..Goddess's richest blessings to you hun...your support means so much to me..
namaste..
r
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My precious r...
Honey...how lovely this poem is. How very true and sad is this realization...I must sadly admit I have been there. This poem captures the humility and worthlessness that such treatment causes. Very wonderful sharing of your gentle soul...thank you Sis!
The Author notes brought great tears of joy to my eyes. We both have found our path...and both by the gentle guidence of of great-grandmothers...who were healers and understood LIFE! The true path of humility and kindness. I have helped you no more than you have helped me dear one. To share ones gathered wisdom is the ultimate will of Goddess. To be as true sisters and look out for one another in all ways. We have done that. How your words have blessed me Auntie r...Ania is going to meet you one day...until then I will whisper your name to our little princess and she shall know you by heart.
I love you too my dear heart...so very much!
Brightest blessings Love~
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thank you my sister..to touch on social ills..in hopes to bring positive change..much like our way..positive energy..don't have any time for haters..hehe...
Goddess's richest blessings to you..
r
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