Action is paitence's spirit,
you must act, and than wait.
Nothing comes of either
when one is done alone.
He who sits for his future,
dies in the waiting room.
A contest entry
- PIF - Free Verse Word Prompt by Dalaney.
850 points, ended July 4, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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He who sits for his future,
dies in the waiting room.
Yum Yum, very well done!

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mm this brings a hit on the emotionally filled bag.
enjoyed. -
Chelsea...i've missed you. One of your shortest writes and still...you manage to captivate me completely. Love, Lane





