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In My Dreams

I see you in dreams
My love, I see you
I know you
Though you have no face.

I hear you in dreams
My love, I hear you
I know you
Though you have no voice.

I touch you in dreams
My love, you hold me
I know you
You keep me warm and safe.

Though you have no voice
I know you
I hear you, my love
Do you hear me?

Though you have no face
I know you
I see you, my love
Do you see me?

In this place
My love, my dreams
I know you
Do you know me?

Author notes

I have dreams sometimes that I am in love but when I wake up of course, all I remember is the feeling and the being, but little else.

hey, no fear, say what you like.

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  • dccrunner
    June 21, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this, Kelsie.
    I'm not sure that I've ever read anything love-related from you before but it suits you.
    Very sweet and lovely. A hint of wistfulness in there too.
    You want to change Tough in the fourth stanza to Though. I know it's just a typo!

    Elizabeth