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The Master Arrives (Sonnet)

The Dark master will be arriving soon,
borne upon the wings of his Dragon steed.
To quench his thirst, satisfy a great need,
she is waiting, morning, midnight or noon.

Adrenaline up from battles he's won,
all that rise up against, fall before Him.
Some live, some die, all at His supreme whim,
most that gaze upon Him, won't see the sun.

Wielding fire, fury, surprise his ally,
strikes from the shadows, always well prepared.
Traps are set for the easily ensnared,
as all their pitiful plans go awry.

He is here, she can hear the dragons call,
must now go warm up His reception hall.

Author notes

Individual Picture prompt shown here:
http://photobucket.com/image/dark%20love/heitz66/LOVE/dark.jpg?o=58

Sonnet

A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme:

Examples of a rhyming scheme:

#1) abab cdcd efef gg
#2) abba cddc effe gg
#3) abba abba cdcd cd

A Shakespearean (English) sonnet has three quatrains and a couplet, and rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 16, 2008
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    Well done

    Interesting write here


  • maralisa silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    The Dark master will be arriving soon,
    borne upon the wings of his Dragon steed.
    To quench his thirst, satisfy a great need,
    she is waiting, morning, midnight or noon.
    Wielding fire, fury, surprise his ally,
    strikes from the shadows, always well prepared.
    Traps are set for the easily ensnared,
    as all their pitiful plans go awry.
    He is here, she can hear the dragons call,
    must now go warm up His reception hall. wow fantastic poem congratulations on yout honor


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 15, 2008

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    wonderful job here.
    best wishes have to go check on my daughter...

    kids come first lol

    Love ya

    tory

  • Nighttime angel
    June 15, 2008
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    WOW... I truly love this Sonnet that you have written. fantastic job with this and with your take on the prompt. I love Sonnets, I don't have the patience to write them. you have a wonderful gift for writing. you have brought this picture to life and you did it beautifully.

    good luck

    kat

  • Nighttime angel
    June 15, 2008

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    http://photobucket.com/image/dark%20love/heitz66/LOVE/dark.jpg?o=58

    here is your link.. if you don't like this let me know. you have one more chance.

    kat


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 15, 2008
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    trying to push me out the spotlight dad

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