And in your hypnosis,
Your deathly rose,
Blackened and charred in death's fragrance,
Purple bleeding over your tear-stained mirror,
Blade to you like a delicate song,
Flowering hatred and all in between,
What a notion, pervading the air,
Hot trails of tears left on my aching heart and
what is left is the nothingness you let behind,
Alas someone other than me will fall prey
to your serpent ways,
Here you lie once more in your purple rose bud,
Ready to break another heart,
Here ends this lesson of treachery,
May you rest in pieces...
In a list
A contest entry
- Reserve and Wait by Rose Dark Thorn.
1200 points, ended July 2, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is an interesting take on the picture provided. It reveals cracks and vulnerability within that may not have been found otherwise. Wonderful take on the picture.
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beautiful done autie!
i love you -
"ready break another heart", should there be "to" in between "ready" and "break"?
apart from that, very imaginative which is always great. well done XxX -
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