out of the dark
clinges of the world
i free myself,
step into a realm
full of trust
hope and zest.
towards
a new horizon
waiting
for life to begin.
A contest entry
- Semi - Quickie Contest by Nighttime angel.
1200 points, ended June 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Uplifting..like the spirit here..All the bets in the contest!
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great job on the prompt. you did an excellent job with your poem. I love the 3rd line the most. along with the last 2 lines.
good luck
kat
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out of the dark
clinges of the world
i free myself,
step into a realm
full of trust
hope and zest.
towards
a new horizon
waiting
for life to begin.wonderful poem good luck in the contest
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http://photobucket.com/image/dark/witchywoman_328/0_outofthedepths.jpg?o=476
here is your link. if you don't like it, please let me know. you have one more chance.
kat
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