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The very first breath of spring

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Sleep through the chilling winds
through Autumns snow and rain
Sleep through the cutting gale
through Winters ice and hail

As you sense the coming warmth
feel Spring arrive with life
issue forth a life belief
a tiny hand, a single leaf

Let it taste the frozen air
and breath in Winters end
Let it feel the Sun of Spring
and let the circle of life begin... 

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  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    July 2, 2008
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    I like this. It sounds like a sort of chant you would say in Wicca during a ritual. Your words flow off the tongue like water flows carelessly down its river path, and I love that about your work. Wonderful take on the picture.


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 29, 2008
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    What a beautiful piece you have penned about all the seasons. Simply stunning. Juls


  • echo-ink
    June 26, 2008
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    OMG beautiful, just awesome, I'm adding you to my FAVS list.

    I really like your poem, LOTS!!!


  • Angelflower
    June 22, 2008
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    I loved this!!! it was just amazing brother!! you really did a wonderful job.. I'm glad that you didn't go with the wolf this time.. I'm shocked that you even got this out of a picture with a frozen tree! ... Bravo!!! Best of luck..

    Angel

  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u131/rosedarkthorn/Pictures/Celtic/34ed.jpg

    If this one doesn't work, let me know and I will send you one more.

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