Come join me,
let me share with you, my instrumental melody,
the space between, to lend an ear, alone inspires me,
and your presence is all i ask for, and your support generally,
let me take you on a sound check,
even if my approach is not correct,
my score, it's fine if you don't adore,
I just want to expose you to more,
another genre, or just the type of flo',
so come and take a seat, watch me just let it go,
I'll take my time, and put thought into it this time,
or maybe i'll let my spirit take control,
not really knowing where my fingers and bow may go,
let it flo' and then you'll see,
that i just want you to hear me,
i'm playing for you and that's what i do,
tell me what you think,
does this sounds like music to you?
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A contest entry
- Semi - Quickie Contest by Nighttime angel.
1200 points, ended June 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I especially like the rhyme within the lines. Sounds like music to me!
Thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Jennifer
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I really love this poem of yours. I love your take on the prompt. excellent job. I like the first 4 lines a lot. and the last 3 lines too.
excellent job.
good luck
kat
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thanks for the kind words, this contest was fun, first one i did off of a picture, thanks again.
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Come join me,
let me share with you, my instrumental melody,
the space between, to lend an ear, alone inspires me,
and your presence is all i ask for, and your support generally,I'll take my time, and put thought into it this time,
or maybe i'll let my spirit take control,
not really knowing where my fingers and bow may go,
let it flo' and then you'll see,
let me take you on a sound check,great music penned good luck in the contest
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thanks i appreciate it.
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http://photobucket.com/image/dark/rosapat/goth23.jpg?o=95
try this one. if you don't like it, please let me know. you have one more chance.
kat
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