Bouncing bubbles light as air,
floating drifting everywhere.
Wild blue yonder up in clouds,
some pop softly some pop loud.
Tiny bubbles in baby's bath,
how they tickle make him laugh.
Bursting here, bursting there,
see baby in the tub so bare.
Fizzing in my soda pop,
shake the bottle twist the top.
In the washer too much suds,
soapy bubbles clean my duds.
Air bubbles seen as we dive,
lets us know you're still alive.
Blow bubbles with chewing gum,
seen in blender mixed with rum.
Blowing bubbles as baby goos,
down his chin upon my shoes.
Always round and airy light,
clearly brings joy and delight.
A contest entry
- Quickie: Bubbles by Folklor.
600 points, ended June 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Superb
I liked this one out of all your poems the most. A lot of innocence conveyed in this one, especially in the second stanza. Great work, Sandy.
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Great Comment
Good Morning and thank you Jaime. Your thoughts on my poetry mean alot to mne. I am so glad you enjoyed this one. It was a fun one to write. You have a great day. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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i agree a very boyant tone full of happiness and fun and the joys of bubbles and BATH TIME! with babies and I like the way you link bubbles with babies lol where ever there are bubbles there are babies lol very good. really enjoyed the read and well done btw on the rhyme very natural and fluent.
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Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your nice comment. You take care. Sandy
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awesome
very upbeat, it is an awesome poem. keep up the good work^_^
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Great Comment
Thank you for reading my poem and commenting. You taske care. Sandy
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I really enjoyed this! Light and airy and fun to read! A feel good poem that felt good to read!
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Good Morning Rob!!!!
I want to thank you for this comment. Glad it gave you a smile my friend. Hope you have a wonderful day.
Bless You,
Sandy
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hello my lovely auntie
What a delightful idea to write this lovely piece.
The background is cute as well.
Love you & wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Hugs and Smiles
Ah, thank you dear niece. Your comment was lovely and brought a much needed smile this morning. Always a pleasure to have you stop by. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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I like the quickie with bubbles. Bubbles everywhere and fun for the baby's tub. The rhyme and flow is so nice, clear and delight to read. Concise and the reader gets nice tour with this work. Thanks for the read.
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Great Comment
Hello Dan, Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate you stopping by. Hugs and Smiles. Take care, Sandy
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