I
fell into his arms like a girl in need
he spread them wide and his muscles
creased into my skin
I
gave him a trinket on a silver chain
his eyes had the freckles of the sky
and his body, the lines of God.
I
trusted him because he had wings that he told me
I had clipped so I handed him what was no one's
to hold and keep safe
I
didn't expect any angel to die
to fall to the ground
to lose it's grace and majesty
I
thought he was the savior, the christ
the beauty, and we kiss as the water glistens saving innocence
but I can't be the savior when I feel
so betrayed
I can't be your guardian angel
unless you whisper my worries away.
A contest entry
- Semi - Quickie Contest by Nighttime angel.
1200 points, ended June 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So full of emotions, I love it.
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gave him a trinket on a silver chain
his eyes had the freckles of the sky
trusted him because he had wings that he told me
I had clipped so I handed him what was no one's
to hold and keep safe
I
didn't expect any angel to die
to fall to the ground
to lose it's grace and majesty and his body, the
lines of God.thought he was the savior, the christ
the beauty, and we kiss as the water glistens saving innocence
but I can't be the savior when I feel
so betrayed
I can't be your guardian angel
unless you whisper my worries away.a great poem good luck in the contest
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try this one, if you don't like it just let me know. you get on more chance
kat
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