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Heaven Sent In A Scarlet Dress

Heaven sent in a scarlet dress,
Isolated and alone
In the snowy meadow.

Reminiscing her past
And reflecting her future
Like a shattered mirror
Or a rippled sea.

Intoxication in the sparkly snow from black eyeliner
And charcoal grey eyeshadow;

She dulls her Winter Wonderland
With a frown as massive as the midnight sky.

As she slowly pokes her vibrant visage out from under her,
She notices a bright white light, that's


Calling her home..

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Contest for Nighttime Angel:

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2409889

Pic Inspiration:

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  • MikeNoxaura
    August 28, 2008
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    cool!

    gorgeous imagery!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    "She dulls her Winter Wonderland
    With a frown as massive as the midnight sky."

    ---that must be one HUGE frown... cause the sky goes on forever.

    [ps. poopie man lmao] .. it's funny how i'm commenting you and you're sitting right next to me too busy drawing and laughing.

    Good times... oh, and KUDOS! FROG LEGS!


  • BellaD
    August 6, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery! Very well written. I enjoyed this.


  • crimsondew
    June 16, 2008

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    Reminiscing her past
    And reflecting her future
    Like a shattered mirror
    Or a rippled sea.

    Intoxication in the sparkly snow from black eyeliner
    And charcoal grey eyeshadow;


    excellent lines here..Wonderful imagery..thoroughly enjoyed reading this...All the best in the contest!


  • maralisa silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    Heaven sent in a scarlet dress,
    Isolated and alone
    In the snowy meadow.

    Reminiscing her past
    And reflecting her future
    Like a shattered mirror
    Or a rippled sea.

    Intoxication in the sparkly snow from black eyeliner
    And charcoal grey eyeshadow;

    She dulls her Winter Wonderland
    With a frown as massive as the midnight sky.

    As she slowly pokes her vibrant visage out from under her,
    She notices a bright white light, that's


    Calling her home..wow wonderful poem good luck in the contest

  • Nighttime angel
    June 15, 2008

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    outstanding job with the prompt. I really love this poem of yours. excellent. I love the last 3 lines the most, especially the last one.

    good luck

    kat

  • Nighttime angel
    June 15, 2008
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    http://photobucket.com/image/fantasy/MargieHaire/Fragile_by_wolfmorphine.jpg?o=70

    if you don't like this one, you get one more chance. just let me know

    kat

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