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Five tiny

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Five tiny angels
picked from the fields of humanity.
Five tiny messengers
sent to remind me of eternity.
Five tiny reminders
of a mothers loving fertility.
Five tiny cupids
sitting in perfect symmetry.
Five tiny faces
smiling in beautiful clarity.
Five tiny blossoms
adding to life's hilarity.

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lol...thanks Kat this was really different for me!!!

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 12, 2008
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    So cute this is

    Oh the little babies this is truly a precious write


    • Unsigned gold member
      July 12, 2008
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      oh my word...this is just so so so not me...I did it as a favor for Kat and I HATE it....me write happy just does not happen....AAARRRRGGGHHHH!!!!!


  • ErisLeFae
    June 23, 2008
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    very cute! and laced with chuckles from little mouths.

  • Judith Chandler
    June 23, 2008

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    They certainly do add to life's hilarity. When they're not crying that is!

    Congrats on your bronze trophy.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    June 15, 2008
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    It isn't blah bro, it's too sweet!! I love it!
    Congrats on the bronze!


  • maralisa silver member
    June 15, 2008
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    congratultions on your shiny


    • Unsigned gold member
      June 15, 2008
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      lol...thanks but this is drivel....I have written better drunk....it is just blah blah blah.....


  • peridotPixi
    June 15, 2008

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    this poem is really cute, i love the picture and the wonderful words you have put with the tiny angels, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy oh yeah i love the rhyme too


  • maralisa silver member
    June 15, 2008
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    Five tiny angles
    picked from the fields of humanity.
    Five tiny messengers
    sent to remind me of eternity.
    Five tiny reminders
    of a mothers loving fertility.
    Five tiny cupids
    sitting in perfect symmetry.
    Five tiny faces
    smiling in beautiful clarity.
    Five tiny blossoms
    adding to life's hilarity.wow fantastic poem good luck in the contest

    • Unsigned gold member
      June 15, 2008
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      Thanks...I normally write dark...this was a challenge from a friend.


      Simon

  • Nighttime angel
    June 15, 2008
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    for it not being your normal style.. you did a fantastic job.. see you should have more faith in yourself.. you can write in any genre as long as you believe in yourself. you never know you just may surprise yourself. see you even managed to bring a smile to someone else today.

    excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck

    kat


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 15, 2008

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    awww cutie, you did well with this Si!
    best of luck

    Tasha


    • Unsigned gold member
      June 15, 2008
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      this really isn't my style or like...but for I wanted to write for Kat..to cheer her up!

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 15, 2008
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    good luck si

    • Unsigned gold member
      June 15, 2008
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      thanks Tash....done it but phew..this really isn't my scene...lol

  • Nighttime angel
    June 15, 2008

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    http://s287.photobucket.com/albums/ll133/Nighttime-angel/?action=view¤t=friendship-2-1.jpg

    ok if you can't get anything from this.. tell me I will give you one more...

    kat


    • Unsigned gold member
      June 15, 2008
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      you gave me tellytubbies....ARGH>>>!!!!.....lol....nope Kat I will make a plan...lol

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