Strings entwine like twisting vines,
dimensions blend as time unbends,
chaos standing on the brink of glory;
Can the universe think to itself....
To bang or not to bang?
That is the question.
Simultaneously,
to breathe or blink out of existence,
a question not easily answered.
Just ask Schrödinger's cat.
Author notes
Option 3 for contest "The most awesome Universe" by Himura Kenshin.
Quote: "SQ|_|33K, I gotz 4 jet pack!” as per rule requirements.
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Cleverly written.
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Wonderful!! This is a great poem!! I really like the way you used them rhyme scheme in it. Thank you for entering my contest.
The Paradox is nothing that is to concern yourself with, unless you’re your own grandfather.
~Himura Kenshin
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"Just ask Schrödinger's cat."
perfection
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Awesome write. I really liked how you had a few theories in there. I also giggled at the "To bang or not to bang" That was an awesome place to take this poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Wonderful
Such a skillful creation for the theme. So well described. Best of luck in the contest.
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I love this!
"to bang or not to bang" I so cracked up!!!!
Best wishes in the contest!
Thanks for your entry.
Write on.
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Hello Gasyalabolas.
I like the way you lead into Schrödinger's cat, nice. I was reading somewhere just today, about some sort of link between chaos theory and fractals, and how chaos maintains order in the natural world. Would need to read more though.
Good luck in the contest, my regards.
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Thank you. It's a bit of gut feeling that chaos, for all it's connotations is what really holds things in balance in this universe.
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